I made the following last changes (did I mention that this proposal is sailing under American Samoa flag? So it’s just in time for the “EOD Thursday, November 14” deadline! 
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- Changed slice percentages from third-third-third to 35% ECC, 25% Zfnd-GU, 40% Zfnd-MG (harmonizing with @mhluongo’s updated proposal).
- Minor/typo tweaks.